Clean Air

Finally

   we

      made

          it

           above

              the

               smog!

Ah,

    I

      can

        breath

           again!

I

 never

    want

        to

          go

            back

              down!

What

    and

      live

        up

          here

            above

              the

                city?

Sure

   why

      not?

        The

          view’s

            fantastic!

—33 words—

Photo credit: mohammadali / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-SA

Trifextra: Week Seventy

For this weekend’s prompt we’re asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the picture (see photo credits).

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6 thoughts on “Clean Air

  1. Suzanne says:

    Nice take on the prompt! And the structure you used is really cool — it made me feel breathless. 🙂

  2. I agree with Suzanne’s comments, and the structure somehow added to the feeling of height. Well done.

  3. Christine says:

    Love the stair-step structure. Very cool.

  4. Draug419 says:

    What fun words and structure. (:

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