Trifextra Week Fifty-Nine: Mirror Games

Child
Plays in the mist
Evil lurking unseen
Waiting for the perfect moment
Patience

Dance by
Wait
Skip past

Striking
No one watches
Her kicking and screaming
Innocence no match for evil
Fading

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Photo credit: Bérenger ZYLA / Foter.com / CC BY-NC-ND

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Trifextra: Week Fifty-Nine

Congrats, winners.  This weekend we’re asking for exactly 33 words inspired by the photo.

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18 thoughts on “Trifextra Week Fifty-Nine: Mirror Games

  1. deanabo says:

    So scary! Great writing.

  2. atrm61 says:

    Oh my!This is terrifying!”
    Dance by
    Wait
    Skip past

    Striking
    No one watches”
    Excellent writing:-)

  3. christina says:

    wow, another one that leaves me feeling a bit panicked! nicely done!

  4. debseeman says:

    Oh how creepy! Fog has always creeped me out anyway, now you reinforced my fear…

  5. barbara says:

    worthy of a Criminal Minds episode!

  6. Draug419 says:

    Innocence no match for evil….oooo spooky

  7. Rosanna says:

    dark….but stimulates the imagination!

  8. Striking.
    That one word sends the prickles of fear. Well done!

  9. Suzanne says:

    Eep! This is great – nice mix of innocence and wickedness. Well done!

  10. Sarah Ann says:

    Very powerful and unsettling. Well done. As Suzanne says, a great mix of innocence and its opposite.

  11. Incredibly eerie. Well done.

  12. The juxtaposition of skip past and striking is chilling.

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  14. Silversound7 says:

    So terrifying and powerful, great work!

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