First Crush

“Hey, you weren’t at school yesterday, are you okay?”

“Yeah, I was sick; here I wanted to give you this for Valentine’s Day. Sorry it’s late.”

“That’s okay,” I said as my first crush gave me some flowers he picked from his mom’s garden and a card he made himself.

The leukemia took him later that year, but I’ve cherished that card and that moment ever since.

Five Sentence Fiction – Cherish

Lillie McFerrin Writes
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10 thoughts on “First Crush

  1. deanabo says:

    A sad story attached to a beautiful memory. Great post.

  2. rlmorgan51 says:

    The message you’re trying to communicate is quite touching and sweet.
    Just one point, your first two sentences are a little confusing the first time you read it.

  3. Lizzie Koch says:

    Such a sad story that has created a beautiful memory. You have said so much in those little sentences. Well done. xx

  4. Sarah Ann says:

    Lovely and heartfelt.

  5. Tender, beautiful… first love tempered by the harsh realities of life. I want this to be fiction, and not really true, but I know for so many children life ends too quickly. My valentine heart just broke!

  6. As the others have bittersweet, but at least she had that moment…and his love, beautifully written.

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