Trifecta Week Sixty-Four: Check Please!

Ethan was weighing the option of ordering dessert or coaxing Amelia back to his place. Dinner was decadent so he imagined dessert would be too, but Amelia looked ravishing in that low cut purple blouse. Ethan let his eyes dwell on Amelia’s neckline a little too long.

“You’re not listening to a word I’m saying!”

“Of course I am, dear.”

“Then what did I just say?”

“You’re starting a new diet tomorrow?”

“So you think I need to loose some weight?!”

“No, I’m sorry, I was distracted by your beauty. You don’t need to loose a pound.”

“So, I’m pretty enough for you, but not interesting enough to hold your attention?”

“Ah…no, I did say that, just when you wear a top like that I find it difficult to concentrate on anything else.”

“Now you don’t like what I wear!”

“Check please!” Ethan called to the waiter.

No dessert tonight.

—–150 words—–

Trifecta: Week Sixty-Four

This week’s word is dwell.

Please remember:
  • Your response must be between 33 and 333 words.
  • You must use the 3rd definition of the given word in your post.
  • The word itself needs to be included in your response.
  • You may not use a variation of the word; it needs to be exactly as stated above.
  • Only one entry per writer.
  • Trifecta is open to everyone.
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10 thoughts on “Trifecta Week Sixty-Four: Check Please!

  1. deanabo says:

    Ha! I love this!

  2. kz says:

    hahaha love this.. a conversation that’s so familiar hahaha

  3. tedstrutz says:

    Oh, I hate it when I can’t lie my way out of a situation. I’ve found it’s better to tell the truth. Clever dialog.

  4. yarnspinnerr says:

    enjoyed the dialogue ….. 🙂

  5. vivinfrance says:

    I could picture the whole scene. It says something for masculine one-track-mindedness that he hadn’t the wit to phrase a compliment properly!

  6. Bee says:

    Hahaha! I love the dialogue here — it rings true!

  7. Draug419 says:

    ha! That’ll learn him to pay attention (:

  8. Jayne Martin says:

    This is hysterical and very “Dorothy Parker,” a favorite humor writer of mine. Really great dialogue.

  9. atrm61 says:

    ROFL!This is so typical-loved every bit!I can hear the men saying,”Women!!”;-)Excellent piece of writing:-)

  10. jannatwrites says:

    Haha! He just couldn’t pitch the shovel and kept digging himself deeper 🙂

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